To be a poet, you must have had the childhood of a
poet~meaning you must recover your sense, impressions from the time when they
were the most vivid~one must be able to touch, sense, taste, see, and hold
childhood:
Anaphora- creates rhythm(color imagery)
Form in a
poem-more than one element- repeating elements
%organic form- altered proverb
or addage-vernacular language
% metaphor-things are connected
and going or go wild
something is to something as something else
is to something else – ex. 1.Climaxing with you is like muscles
stretched taut over bone 2.The solution was hydrochloric acid, the problem was
therefore a chemical inbalance 3.up is like down when you cannot tie even your
own shoelaces 4. A spider on an old mans beard is like pieces of sand in your
bed at 3am in the morning. 5. If I should wake before I die kiss the apples
from my eyes 6.the wino took to coma like a crack addict to his self-medicating
pipe 7.The oars on the boat rowed as if
a tall lanky pirate making his way to the Pitts of hell.
Image, metaphor,analogy and
connection> filling in whatever blanks suit fancy: leaving blank those that
do not trigger any response
Language is a
more plastic medium than we are taught
The objective
world is our best source for images
Poems are made
things
Ritual
poem-series of activities which cause things to happen---(I will not trap your heart
love)
Ballads-are songs, rhyme schemes-odd; horrible tale, current
events; injustice
------A
------B
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ex. Listen my friends to my sad tale of
woe
the pains started early caught between blows
I protected, screened, and dulled
the smoke signal rising low
not a cigarette causing the pain
alas the greed of cover-up and children needlessly slain
Protected for years, as a child
I heard the stories, of the priviledged few
Descending, for fashion
accepting for grace
societies chantreuse